<p>Ok so I start out with a quote and a metahpor,
then I go on to almost a timeline of what happened in the last eight years.
Then I end it with what I learned from it.
I’m already at 2 pages double spaced.
Should I add my feelings and sentiments into the timeline of what happened or would it be fine. The timeline is pretty concise and moves pretty fast, but I only say what I did in response, not what I felt or what I learned, I leave that to the end.</p>
<p>You should definitely add that bit at the end. It’s about as important as the timeline itself.</p>
<p>I mean is it ok to just move through a timeline without adding my tidbits? into it?
I think the last paragraph is pretty effective in telling what I had gotten out of the whole experience.</p>
<p>You just answered that yourself. If the last paragraph does the job well, you don’t have to go go through the timeline adding stuff individually. And I think, though of course I can’t be sure, if you add stuff individually you’ll double the length, and no one’s going to want to read it.</p>