҈҈҈Be as brutal as you can...BUTCHER MY CESSAY!

College Essays
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<p>I’ve received mixed reviews from my friends about my essay for Cornell so I wanted to more opinions on it.</p>

<p>If anyone wants to help me out, please send me a message or post here and then rate the essay from 1-10 </p>

<p>DON’T BE NICE ABOUT THE GRADING</p>

<p>thanks</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. o:</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me it.</p>

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<p>sure, pm me. i’ll…try to crush your essay, i guess. haha.</p>

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<p>I pm’ed all of you guy.</p>

<p>thanks!</p>

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<p>yeah PM me too, i’ll give it a shot</p>

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<p>ill give it a try.</p>

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<p>Lets see it.</p>

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<p>sure .</p>

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<p>ya pm me 10char</p>

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<p>I can take a look too if you want still. Pm it over</p>

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<p>I do not need to even read your cessay. Proof read it for sure!!!</p>

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<p>I’m a soon-to-be-Berkeley-student (class of 2013).
PM me, and I’ll critique it :)</p>

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<p>Pm me as well, I will definitely review and critique your essay. But in return i would like you to make the same concessions for my treatise. </p>

<p>thanx in advance.</p>