Bennington supplement critiques & help choosing between two analytical essay samples?

<p>Would anyone be willing to critique my Bennington College essays (they're super short) and help me choose between two analytical essay samples to send to Bennington and Bard?</p>

<p>I already sent in my app for both those schools, so I'd be happy to. PM me.</p>

<p>Is your screen name a reference to a certain Big Star song?</p>

<p>Thanks so much! </p>

<p>YES! "Thirteen" is my favorite, though. You like them too?</p>

<p>I'll send along a critique(s) tomorrow afternoon.</p>

<p>Thirteen is a great song! Simple yet touching. Check out the Elliott Smith cover if you haven't already. #1 Record is one of my favorite albums, though I'm partial to Radio City as well.</p>