<p>Yes or No?
I would love it if someone could read my personal statement and give me even a little bit of feedback? =)
It’s a bit idealistic/dreamy, but the info i put in the supplements/activity elaboration is a more grounded…is that a good balance?</p>
<p>To prove that I’m not an internet psycho, here’s some bg info!
High school senior from southern california
ECs:
Varisty athletic team (sorry, purposefully a little bit vague), cheer/dance squad (i love all types of dance though, from ballet to breakdancing), community service, etc etc
Occasional model, one summer internship, one long-term internship
Horrid (by yale’s standards) GPA/class rank, but great SAT Is and IIs. </p>
<p>I’m a girl, if it’s not obvious</p>
<p>Happy holidays!</p>