Brave New World, Nagasaki, and Stun Guns =12?

<p>I wrote a poignant (I think) essay on the demerits of unrestricted Technology for the May Sat 2008.</p>

<p>Examples:</p>

<p>Brave New World
Nuclear bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki
and the abuse of Stun Guns by Police, specifically that kid that got tazed trying to meet John Kerry aka “Dont taze me dude”</p>

<p>However, my conclusion was two rather emotionally charged and galvanizing sentence. I would have written more, but I simply had no more space.</p>

<p>Obvisiously, I completely filled both pages and used many Sat words.</p>

<p>Is a 12 in reach?</p>

<p>yes. great points… should be a 12</p>

<p>With a 12 on the essay, how much leway do you have on the writing to get an 800?</p>

<p>anyother opinions?</p>

<p>Yeah, if you filled up two pages with those well thought out points you definitely got a 12, as for your question about the 800, if you get 10-12 wrong you should get >700, leaving one blank you’d probably still get an 800 at least a 790.</p>

<p>Two wrong I would say, possibly 3.</p>

<p>your fired, what did you write for Brave New World? just curious cuz i also used that example. I also talking about a culture of conformity in the 1950s. I filled up 1.5 pages but my writing is fairly small and I’m worried that I didn’t really make any sense. What do u guys think i got?</p>

<p>I wrote how technology has machinized people turning them into souless beings unable to feel emotion beyond sexual pleasure.</p>

<p>Those are nice examples. Eh, my essay was terrible. I came up with very abstract ideas, like googling pictures of the great wall isn’t like actually experiencing it…
haha.</p>

<p>Kelper, I am sorry to say that you may be in trouble. But was for YourFired, thats a definite 12.</p>

<p>YourFired:</p>

<p>If you score 12 on the essay, you may be able to miss one or two of the other questions and still get an 800.</p>

<p>In October I scored 11 on the essay, missed two “difficult” questions, and got 790 on the writing section.</p>

<p>Here are my score details:</p>

<p>IMPROVING SENTENCES…CORRECT…INCORRECT
Easy Questions…8…0
Medium Questions…10…0
Difficult Questions…6…1
TOTAL…24…1</p>

<p>IDENTIFYING ERRORS…CORRECT…INCORRECT
Easy Questions…3…0
Medium Questions…5…0
Difficult Questions…9…1
TOTAL…17…1</p>

<p>IMPROVING PARAGRAPHS…CORRECT…INCORRECT
Easy Questions…1…0
Medium Questions…4…0
Difficult Questions…1…0
TOTAL…6…0</p>

<p>ESSAY
Reader One…5
Reader Two…6
TOTAL…11</p>