<p>Hi,
I’m looking for some constructive criticism on an the supplemental essay I’ve written for Brown. It’s relatively short (limit 1500 characters). </p>
<p>The prompt:
Sculptor Jacques Lipchitz once said, Cubism is like standing at a certain point on a mountain and looking around. If you go higher, things will look different; if you go lower, again they will look different. It is a point of view. With this in mind, describe a moment when your perspective changed.</p>
<p>If you’re willing to read it and offer some critique, please PM me. :)</p>