BU Supplemnta Essay need feed back

<p>This is my BU supplemental essay and here is the prompt</p>

<p>It is three weeks before the start of your freshman year at BU, and you are talking to your new roommate for the first time. Since you are trying to get to know each other, what are a few things you would want to share about who you are?</p>

<p>if anybody wants to help me correct it, i can PM you the essay</p>

<p>Is this BU as in Baylor University?</p>

<p>no it's Boston University</p>

<p>I'd be willing to read it if you're still looking for help. I still have to write mine, but I promise I won't steal anything haha</p>

<p>I'd read it, if you like--PM me!</p>

<p>In the spirit of full disclosure: I am also applying to BU. I already submitted my app, though, and I did a different prompt anyway (the global community one).</p>

<p>I'd advise against sending it to emma, by the way. Nothing personal, but sending essays to someone with no post history who hasn't already applied is not the greatest idea.</p>

<p>If you want, feel free to send it my way. Not applying to BU and have all my essays at least drafted, so no worries in terms of stealing. I'd like to think I'm a pretty good writer or at least good with feedback, so hopefully I can be of some help.</p>

<p>Would you mind looking over my Common App essay, by any chance? I really need some feedback.</p>

<p>I understand that concern, but I sort of feel like this is one that you don't have to worry too much about. It's too individualized. And I was just being honest. How does anyone know you actually submitted it? This whole website is kinda a gamble I guess.</p>