CA Essay Prompt 1 -- Drafting?

<p>Hey everyone :)</p>

<p>I have my essay finished and drafted multiple-times over with the help of my honors advisor. If anyone would be willing to look over mine and give some critical feedback (brief or very long, I’d appreciate either, particularly long though :p) let me know and I will PM it to you. I can do yours in exchange too!</p>

<p>sure, pm me. I just finished mine as well.</p>

<p>disregard this please…</p>