Calling all you critical CC-ers! Please, Please critique my common app essay

<p>I am applying ED to Middlebury and also applying to some other selective LAC's. I know my topic is unique and im really counting on my essay to stand out. Please be very critical. You are not going to hurt my feelings</p>

<p>I would take a look at it. PM it to me.</p>

<p>I can take a look at it, sure. Send it along.</p>