Can anyone give some feedback on my followup letter to a college that waitlisted me?

College Essays
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<p>Post here, and I can PM you the letter (i mean the email). It’s got an ECA update as well.</p>

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<p>Or post here and I’ll PM it to you.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me and I’ll let you know what I think :)</p>

<p>Sent from my SPH-M910 using CC</p>

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<p>PM me! I’ll definitely give you some feedback.</p>

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<p>bump 10char</p>

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<p>I can look at it if you’d like.</p>