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<p>There is a saying that states, " It is not enough to prepare our children for the world, we must also prepare the world for our children’'.
Assignment: what do you think it means to prepare the world for children? How can families best do this? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on the issue.</p>

<p>There is no escaping the fact that parents always want best things for their children. They do their utmost to prepare children for the world. However, according to a pretty well-known saying, that is still insufficient. They should also prepare the world for their off-spring. Personally, I, myself, strongly believe in this notion.</p>

<p>So what does “the world” mean here? Does it imply the whole human being or something huge?</p>

<p>First and foremost, from my instincts, the world is the environment. It is the natural world that people have a deep and long-term bond with. From a very young age to declining years, they survive in it and cannot live without it even in a single day. The environment is the sea which we swim in, the water which we drink, the trees which we rest under and so forth. It impinges on people’s own lives and their children’s later ones. The following generation will live in the same environment wherein their parents used to live. Therefore, as long as their parents preserve it beautifully, they will have the golden opportunity to enjoy spectacular sceneries and live in fresh atmosphere. To realize this desirable perspective, parents should take action to protect the environment as soon as possible. They may start by using more renewable energy and less private transport. Also, they are advised to partake in environmental projects on both local and worldwide scale. Before parents are likely to do harm to the environment, they should wait for a moment and think about their kids’ lives. They do not deserve to suffer from what they do not cause. They deserve to live in far cleaner and more beauteous world.</p>

<p>The second thing that parents are recommended to prepare is their relationships. It is palpable that relationships connect people in one society. Relationships which parents build today are ones their off-spring will inherit in the future. Consequently, it really matters how parents treat others. When they build a good reputation, children not only make an initially amicable impression but also have the necessary confidence and pride to communicate with people. In stark contradiction, supposing parents are under court supervision or incarcerated, kids will certainly start their own life in a much challenging way. They have to be confronted with prejudices and suspicious looks. This means their struggle to regain people’s trust and respect. Understanding probable consequences of their doings at this moment in time, parents had better modify their behaviors. They should attend people in want of help and build up truthful relationships. Parents, most substantially, avert leaving a terrible image in others’ mind by ignoring the community or committing offences.</p>

<p>To encapsulate, preparing the world for children is truly consequential. Parents, instead of worrying about quixotic things, should presently aid children to lead a contented life by protecting environment and establishing enviable reputation.</p>

<p>Can anyone give me some relevant examples for this topic?</p>