Can anyone help me revice my UC prompt #1

<p>can someone help me revice and correct any grammar mistake for UC prompt #1. PM me if you want to take a look at it thx</p>

<p>sure ill read it</p>

<p>anyone want to help me revice it?</p>

<p>I will be happy to help you “revise” your essay.</p>

<p>I’m already in college so I won’t steal it. Just drop me a PM when you’re online.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll take a look.</p>

<p>suree 10 char</p>