Can anyone look at my 150 word short answer on Common App?

College Essays
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<p>Please write me ur email address only if you can give good feed back and correction.
Thank you</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:ying7686■■■■■■■■■■■■">ying7686■■■■■■■■■■■■</a>~</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:kingofclifton@gmail.com">kingofclifton@gmail.com</a></p>