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<p>“That we obtain too easily ,we esteem too lightly .It is dearer only which gives everything it’s value” Thomas Rein .</p>

<p>One’ who relish the fruit reaped by their sweat would apprise Thomas Paine’s assertion “That what we obtain too easily , we esteem too lightly.” The attitude of man for over last few centuries has been summarised in this eternal saying .It was truly said “The way to happiness is through misery”.To treasure our good fortune we must suffer through ill -fortune .We are ungratifying for the the fortune bestowed upon us innately.
We continue to whine about the things we were unfortunate not to have while the precious gift of life surpasses us .One doesn’t need a bird’s eye view to see ambivalent teenager waste his crucial and unprecedented years for the clich</p>