Can anyone proof-read my Common App Essay please? Deadline's tonight!

<p>Title says it all. I’ll pm the essay over. Any help will be greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>I’ll proof read yours if you read mine…pm it over.</p>

<p>Is it ok if Ii write a poem for this essay?</p>

<p>(Optional) No admission application can meet the needs of every individual. If you think additional information or material will give us a more thorough impression of you, please respond below.</p>

<p>Or perhaps not. How about something about my role of life. Example: carpe diem, etc.</p>