<p>Hello! I am looking mostly for feedback, advice, anything that you would think help my essay to be better and more effective…</p>
<p>I will send you a copy through private message if you are willing to help!</p>
<p>Thank you so very much! I am forever in your debt :-)</p>
<p>Hi, I can read it!</p>
<p>I like it! Overall, it’s very nice ;D</p>
<p>Nitpicky thing I have is with your use of vocab, tho. I wouldn’t describe moisture as binding (maybe like sweltering instead, but that changes the context), and most, if not all encounters with mosquito tend to be short and quick. I’d think over your choice of words in some places before submitting, but otherwise, you’re good to go 
Good luck!</p>
<p>Edit: Oh… you removed your post as I was typing, this, lol…</p>
<p>I’d be happy to, but I can’t PM right now. I will be able to in a while though so send it over ;)</p>