Can anyone read my CommonApp essay?

<p>Would anyone like to read my common app essay and tell me if it is good for Princeton? </p>

<p>Please, only read it if you are actually going to give feedback. Thanks :)</p>

<p>I will give you feedback :) PM me</p>

<p>PM me too. I love giving feedback ;)</p>

<p>I'd love to help! just pm me</p>

<p>Yes PM me:)</p>

<p>PM me :) 10char</p>

<p>I'll give you valuable inputs. PM me as well!</p>