I suggested some edits via PM. I also asked whether the missed spring registration should be mentioned if procrastination was involved and it really is better anyway to leave that out and just describe courses the student will take this summer. It would be better to promise to leave the job, not decrease it. I question whether those three courses will be a “reasonable course load” during a summer term (especially if working). Good to mention living at home. And strong emphasis on new strategies for academics is essential.
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