Can I have someone read my college app essay rough draft?

I’m just looking for someone to read over my college application essay rough draft. I have to submit it to my English teacher by Monday morning. I was really lost on what to write about and just wanted to get some feedback. Thank you.

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@scruffy1025 I will PM you. Look for the green number top right next to your avatar.

Hi, I might need your help and based on your profile you look like the best person to ask to. I wrote my college essay and I would really appreciate some feedbacks. If you go over my profile and check you’ll see that I posted it there. I would really much appreciate your help, thank you.

Hi leon005. Yes I can read your essay. I will send you a private message.