Can I have someone read over my personal statement?

College Essays
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<p>The personal statement is about how messing up during my piano recital changed me. It is optional for the college I am applying to, but I would like to make a good impression because my GPA is a bit sub-par. I am also not a good writer (average at best), so I could really use any help I can get. Thank you for any help. </p>

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<p>I really need help. Can anyone please read it?</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll give it a read. PM me. </p>

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<p>I can read it too if you want a second opinion.</p>

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<p>@utahblues22‌ and @jpheys‌. Thank you. PMs inbound. </p>

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<p>Sure I can also read it :)</p>

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<p>send it :)</p>