Can somebody comment on my intro?

<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>this is coming from the Blue book test number 8 writing prompt</p>

<p>Prompt:Should heroes be defined as people who say what they think when we ourselves lack the courage to say it? </p>

<p>Intro: Heroes are those who speak their minds when others would normally not have the courage to do so. Though this definition of a hero may be a bit overused, it is without a doubt that if a person does not stick up for others, he or she is not a hero. Examples from books that I have read and from personal experience help exemplify this fact further.</p>

<p>any comments would be much appreciated.</p>