Can somebody review my Why UChicago and Why Northwestern essays?

Everybody says to be specific and not cliche but I don’t know how specific is specific enough and what is too cliche. I like my ideas but I may need different examples. If you can help comment and I’ll PM you me essays. Both are around 300-400 words so not too long. Any insight is appreciated.

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yeah sure! send it to me, i’ll look at it.

In your Why Chicago essay be sure to express your love for The Core, your sense of why you would fit into their student body’s intellectual atmosphere, and one specific, academic interest that would be met. That should easily cover 300 words.

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Sure thing! Just pm me