Can someone check out the first draft of my common app essay? :)

College Essays
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<p>I wrote it about an environment where you feel completely at home, though it could probably go under a lot of the questions. It’s about my experiences in theater tech</p>

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<p>I can read it if you want! Just PM me.</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me.</p>

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<p>I’m pretty new here, but I would help you out too. Shoot me a PM if you want.</p>

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<p>Send it to me too! I made a thread a few months ago where about 20+ prospective students sent me their essays and they had pretty good feedback!</p>

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<p>I will read it! PM me.</p>

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<p>PM’d all of you! :)</p>

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<p>My biggest worry is that it isn’t focused enough on ME. Thoughts?</p>

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<p>PM me please!</p>

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<p>Sent! 10char</p>

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<p>And me too?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me :)</p>

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<p>I would be happy to read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me please</p>