Can someone critique a "first experience" essay?

Colleges & Universities University of Pennsylvania
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<p>thannnks! i appreciate it</p>

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<p>i will, PM me.</p>

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<p>i’ll read, PM</p>

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<p>i will too, you can pm me as well</p>

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<p>i will, pm me</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll help.</p>

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<p>sure thing. just pm me :)</p>

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<p>why not? i’ll help.</p>

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<p>yep i did the page 217 one</p>

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<p>Sure. pm me</p>

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<p>yeah im doing the 217 one also, so ill read it…just PM me.</p>

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<p>Yeah I’ll read it too. pm me</p>

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<p>yup yup! PM me</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll review it for ya</p>

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<p>PM me too.</p>

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<p>sure pm… i will break it down for you</p>

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<p>Hey, I’m a Wharton freshman, feel free to pm me and I’ll look it over…someone did the same for me last year, so I’d like to spread the Penn love =)</p>

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<p>I will if you want…</p>

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<p>PM me…btw how long this essay supposed to be??</p>

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<p>PM me! yeah… i’m also curious</p>