Can Someone critique my essay

<p>Hi, I am looking to transfer to University of Illinois I was wondering if someone could look over my essay and critique it. Thank you and please someone do it as soon as possible. All you have to do is message me and I will give you my email address.Here is the prompt: ESSAY: In an essay of 300 words or less, explain your motivation to transfer from your current/former institution to Illinois and how your academic interests and/or professional goals will be fulfilled in your intended program of study.</p>