can someone help me with my appeal letter

Colleges & Universities University of California - Berkeley
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<p>hi…this is the first time i’m posting here. I came across this forum while i was researching for appeal information. I am a transfer student for Fall 2007, and I’m trying to write a letter appealing for my denied admission to Cal…would anybody kindly enough willing to read my letter and give me any critiques or suggestion? thanks in advance for your help ! ^^</p>

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<p>Some previous threads about appeals:</p>

<p><a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=341458[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=341458&lt;/a&gt;
<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=333885[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=333885&lt;/a&gt;
<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=320721[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=320721&lt;/a&gt;
Although these are about freshman appeals, but i dont think there is much difference</p>