can someone help revise my essay im kinda stuck

<p>So Ive got my feedback from the forum and its not exactly the best… Im honestly not the best at writing essay’s and as you can see here ive fallen short of that. If anyone can help me revise my paper id really appreciate it i really dont know who else to ask
[url=<a href=“Zippyshare.com - [now defunct] Free File Hosting”>Zippyshare.com - [now defunct] Free File Hosting]Zippyshare.com[/url</a>]</p>

<p>try to contact someone from the consolidated list of essay readers</p>

<p>can you tell me where that is? is it here on the forums?</p>