Can someone look at my personal statement?

<p>It means a lot to me and I want someone to help give me advice with some qualms I have. Thanks!</p>

<p>On second thought...I think I've put too much effort in this to risk being ripped off.....</p>

<p>i'm interested in taking a look at your personal statement. Shoot it over in a PM and i'll get back to you in a flash~ if you're interested, can you look through mine too? is yours a UC personal statement?</p>

<p>No, mine is for the common app :)</p>

<p>Bump. I'll be more than willing to read others but just know it will probably take me until this weekend to give good feedback...</p>