Can someone make sure my why chicago essay isn't too crazy

Colleges & Universities University of Chicago
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<p>I started off writing in a somewhat serious tone but the second and third paragraphs are kind of crazy . I just want to make sure they’re not inappropriate. Can someone, preferably an EA’er or undergrad, take a look?</p>

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<p>ill do it (got in ea), pm me</p>

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<p>I got in EA too!!
PM me!</p>

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<p>Really? You got in EA? Then what is this doing here on 12/22?
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<p>LMAO. Owned.</p>

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<p>Bahahahahaha</p>

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<p>Busted, ha. </p>

<p>pacers7ind, please stop ■■■■■■■■ and clogging up the forums. Don’t you have anything better to do?</p>

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<p>I’ve already submitted my app for RD<br>
I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>fauxfollet, you are my favorite person ever. Good job looking up the posting history!</p>

<p>and I got in EA, so if you need help I can spread the wealth. =D</p>

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<p>I got in EA, and my essay was sort of crazy (I had this sentence that was like 200 words long) so I’ll happily take a look.</p>