Can someone please critic my essay?

<p>It is a UNC supplement essay.</p>

<p>i will! pm me</p>

<p>I applied to unc as well! I chose the “tell us about a time you ended up where you didnt expect to” essay. I’d be happy to read yours.</p>

<p>I’d love to read and provide my comments. PM me.</p>

<p>Though I am not an expert so its your wish if you want to send it or not!</p>

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<p>Well, if the above is any indication . . .</p>

<p>:rolleyes:</p>

<p>… it’s “critique.”</p>

<p>[Critique</a> | Define Critique at Dictionary.com](<a href=“http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/critique]Critique”>CRITIQUE Definition & Usage Examples | Dictionary.com)</p>