Can someone please critique and edit my Woodbury University Application Essay???

<p>I’m applying Woodbury Private University for this fall and I need someone to edit my application essay and give me back some good solid critiques!
The prompt is…
Describe your professional goals and how your chosen major relates to these goals.
Is there a professional in your field of choice who might serve as your role model?</p>

<p>If you want to edit my essay, please let me know and I will PM my essay to you!
Thanks in advance! ;D</p>

<p>sure, I will try to critique it</p>

<p>Someone willing to edit my application essay?!? Pleeeassse?</p>

<p>pm me i’ll read it</p>