Can someone please help me out?

<p>im really struggling with my college essay, and would really appreciate it if a parent could just read it over real quick and give me their 2 cents on it…anyone care to help?</p>

<p>You can PM it to me along with: the prompt you are using; the school(s) you are considering and a little info about yourself. Might be a day or so before I get back to you.</p>