Can someone please look over my essay?

<p>I am applying to another research program and would like it if my essay got reviewed by someone on CC. It is about my interest in neuroscience and the unknown. Pretty interesting, I thought. I'll PM those who post on this thread. I'd greatly appreciate any help!</p>

<p>What’s in it for me? ;)</p>

<p>The sense of aiding a junior in pursuing his passion! :)</p>

<p>i will!!!</p>


<p>I’ll gladly read it. It sounds extremely interested</p>

<p>i’ll do it. pm it to me.</p>

<p>wow, quacoh has necroed (or what’s the word I’m supposed to use for this in hsl, i forget) so many threads…</p>

<p>whats that mean!?</p>

<p>I’ll look it over too.</p>

<p>I live in the past.</p>