Can someone please read my college essay on feminism?

<p>Hey! I am a new member, a high-school senior, and confused about my common app essay. </p>

<p>I am applying to Johns Hopkins, Tufts, Columbia, Cornell, Barnard, Emory, UVA, Umich, BU etc. Essay on feminism. Can you please critique?</p>

<p>Ofcourse I can't directly post it on here. But can I send it to you perhaps - its 650 words.</p>

<p>I'm a 2014er, but I'll read and critique your essay if you don't mind it. If you do mind, I understand.</p>

<p>I'm a parent. PM the essay to me and I'll take a look.</p>

<p>yes..uhmm...can you send it to me?</p>

<p>i'm a high school senior, if you want i can take a look at yours, give what advice others have given me as well, and i'd be happy to read another person's :)</p>

<p>I'll read yours!</p>

<p>If you want to read mine, let me know :)</p>