Can someone please read my essay?

College Essays
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I have a average GPA (bad 1st yr) so my essay means a lot in terms of where I can get accepted into. I’m aiming to write a Ivy-Calibre essay. Can someone give me feedback please?

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I’ll take a read, PM it

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I’m a rising sophomore in college, send it my way and I’d be happy to critique it.

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Same here.

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I’d be happy to read it, just PM it to me

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I’d be happy to look over it and give u comments!!