Can someone please review my CommonApp essay? :)

College Essays
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<p>I would love for someone to review my essay and help me fix my errors. If someone is interested, please PM me, and I’ll send the essay over to you :slight_smile: Please and thank you!</p>

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<p>Send it over!</p>

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<p>Sent it over! Thanks :]</p>

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<p>I am willing!! Pm to mr and I shall try my best!</p>

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<p>PM me, i’ll be glad to read it :)</p>

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<p>PM me, hope to be of some help</p>

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<p>ill read it :)</p>