This is my 5th draft and I was hoping someone could read it to see how it flows and maybe let me know what I could do to improve/fix some parts.
I plan on applying to U of M, Georgia tech, and Johns Hopkins for Biomedical Engineering. All early action.
This is my first post on CC so I’m not too familiar with the system.
Please reply and I’ll send a DM or PM. Please, only serious responses!

