Can someone proofread my essay?

College Essays
1

<p>It is the commonapp one</p>

2

<p>I can read it.</p>

3

<p>I will, too! :)</p>

4

<p>Sure, as long as it’s just proofreading - I don’t want to edit it and be responsible for making a change to it that makes it worse. I can proofread well, though!</p>

5

<p>i’ll read it!</p>

6

<p>I Will Take A Look…</p>