<p>Hello,
I would really appreciate it if someone can read my UC common essay. The prompt is:</p>
<p>Describe the world you come from for example, your family, community or school and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. </p>
<p>Not doubting anybody here, but having other students (even those that are your friends) proofread your essay is the easiest way to have it copied. Having a unique essay is important to the college application process.
I would recommend asking any of your teachers at school.</p>