Prompt: Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
https://docs . google.com/document/d/1yod-9_nBVu8kuyTebq7Qv4bjTJXZFCORbQgbyK4BcTs/edit?usp=sharing (erase the spaces)
I’m not the best writer, so I need help with grammar and punctuation. I especially need help if I added a comma instead of a semicolon or colon. The last paragraph are little notes to help me with my conclusion. I plan on showing how all of what I wrote shaped my dreams. If someone can help me with my conclusion that would be great.