Can someone rate my personal statement? It would be the greatest act of kindness.

I would appreciate it soo much. I have put in a lot of work. I need any criticism possible. Is anyone willing to read it? I will send the essay through message or email.

I would be willing to take a look, but obviously if you don’t like something don’t take it. I can’t promise anything wonderful, but I will definitely give it my best go

I’m curious; when a student asks in this manner, do they have no parents, teachers, friends, relatives or counselors who can review their essays?

@JustOneDad It could be too personal for the person to want others in his life reading it.

Or maybe they want a perspective from someone who doesn’t know them personally, as the adcoms don’t know them.