Can someone read just a few sentences for me?

College Essays
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<p>Hey everyone, so my CA is nearly complete (and its 10/29…so…)
However, I have some doubts about a few of the sentences I wrote in my essay (mainly for grammar/clarity reasons). So I was wondering if someone will read over them for me and tell me if they make sense…and if not, how should i change it.</p>

<p>Let me know if you are willing to read them! Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>and since this mainly concerns grammar/clarity/style, I’d really prefer someone with a strong English background please…thanks!</p>

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