Can someone read my essay and give me a feedback?

College Essays
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<p>Please be give me honest feedback. :[</p>

2

<p>I can read it.</p>

3

<p>Bump.
Prompt: Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again? -CommonApps 2013</p>

4

<p>I’ll take a look at it too if you want.</p>

5

<p>I can read it for you! :-)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and give feedback :)</p>

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<p>I will read it!</p>