Can someone read my essay and give me some tips?

<p>Hey guys, Im an Egyptian Student and im planning to apple to Kentucky University. I'm not a really good writer so i was wondering if anyone's willing to give my essay a quick look and tell me some suggestions :) would be a nice christmas gift. Thanks</p>

<p>Sure buddy.send it to me</p>

<p>I can take a look. Pm it to me.</p>