Can someone read my essay? I'm getting polar opinions

College Essays
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<p>I’ve been working on this essay for a while and i need someone to read it to see if it a good essay and if it works with the prompt.
It’s for the UC prompt #2</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>No 09’ers please.</p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

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<p>bump!</p>

<p>No one is willing to read my essay? :(</p>

<p>I’ll allow 09’ers too</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read it… if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href=“mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu”>sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>