Can someone read my essay? :]

Colleges & Universities Brown University
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<p>well guys… anyone willing to criticize my essay please PM ME…!
im hispanic and i decided to write about this website i created for latino music… idk if admission officers would be thrown off by it lol…</p>

<p>anyone? :]
any help would be appreciated</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>thanks… :slight_smile: anyone else?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read :)</p>

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<p>thanks… anyone else… :]</p>

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<p>PM me i’ll take a look :]</p>

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<p>ill read it if you send it to me. i love to edit.</p>