Can someone read my longer Chicago essay?

<p>If anyone is available, could he or she please look over my longer Chicago essay on the Miles Davis quotation (#1). I’m almost finished and I’ll PM it. I know that peer review is the best way to make improvements on writing. Thank you so much!!!</p>

<p>I will, if you read mine and tell me if it works for the “make up your own prompt” one. PM me</p>

<p>no (10 char)</p>

<p>kidding. I got in EA, i’ll read it for you</p>

<p>i would be happy to read it!</p>

<p>i’ll read it. pm me</p>