Can someone read my UF essay?

This is the statement:

Martin Luther King, Jr. once said, “Our loyalties must transcend our race, our tribe, our class, and our nation; and this means we must develop a world perspective.” Describe a time when your perspective changed. How did your perspective change and why did it change?

Bump.

Hey PM me and I will check it out

I’ll read it. I got to write one for UF but I’m a transfer.

I revised it, anyone else?

I can read it and help revise it