Can someone read over my essays?

I would appreciate any feedback on my college essays.

Don’t share your essay with brand new users with only a few posts. Beware, brand new users will pop in to offer help. You run the risk of having your essay stolen and or plagiarized.

@STEM2017 is correct, and we post these warnings frequently. As a '74 Reed grad whose only child is in grad school, I’m about as safe a bet as you can get. PM the essays to me, and I’ll give them a read. Let me know the prompt(s) you;re responding to.

@accelerate45 I’m also free to read essays. I’m a senior in high school, but I’ve read a lot of other essays on here. Plus, I already submitted by applications and essays. PM me if you want