Can someone review my UC essay?

Applying to College
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I need some volunteers to read my UC essays(all 3 if you can), I’m planning to send them tomorrow and my parents don’t know much English so they’re not really helpful in proofreading my essays.

so, if you’re willing, leave your email address. I can review your essay too if you want, my email: <a href="mailto:davidh87@gmail.com">davidh87@gmail.com</a> maybe we can swap essay

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<p>bump
anyone?</p>

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<p>…</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:hzjames@yahoo.com">hzjames@yahoo.com</a>, let’s swap</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:brntcldwll@aol.com">brntcldwll@aol.com</a>. Send them my way.</p>